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分词结构

① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 同位语

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省略结构

②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. 注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼。

状语从句

③ When Jay’s first album was released in 2000, he got the world’s attention. ④ His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to receive many awards for his songs. 定语从句

尽量用复合句,倒装,非限性定语从句等，润色文章。

⑤ His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things. 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组。 名师寄语

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书面表达一经典精讲（下） 讲义参考答案 人物传记 题一：

Life of a person

Norman Bethune was a Canadian doctor. He was born on March 3rd, 1890, in a small town of

Canada. He entered University of Toronto and received his medical degree in 1916. After graduation Bethune moved to Montreal and gave free medical care to help poor people there. Bethune also set up a free art school for children. Bethune left for China in 1938. He worked selflessly as a doctor and saved many Chinese soldiers. Dr. Bethune died from blood poisoning in 1939 and was buried in Shijiazhuang.

Dr. Bethune is considered to be a devoted and selfless international doctor. 题二：

The Chinese will never forget the day, August 28, 2004, when Liu Xiang got the gold medal of 110 m hurdles in 28th Olympic Games. Not merely did he beat all the well-known opponents at home and abroad, but he was the first one who finished the match as well, especially he only spent

12.91 seconds which was 0.03 seconds faster than the former world record. Liu Xiang was born on June 13, 1983 in a worker’s family. When he was just a little boy, he was sent to the children’s sports school by his parents. There was no denying that he was a lucky boy, because he was found by Coach Sun Haiping. He is a good boy that he always takes a great many presents to respect his parents whenever he comes back home. Famous as he is, he is always friendly to his neighbors as usual. So great is Liu Xiang that he is called as our national hero. It is universally acknowledged that China has a great athlete called Liu Xiang. Liu Xiang said that he would do his utmost to achieve his another goal in life---the champion in the Beijing 2008 Olympics.

Such is Liu Xiang, a man with strong mind and a promising future.

题三：

Yang Liwei, born in Liaoning Province, who is a pilot, is 38 years old. One October 15 China launched its Shenzhou V manned spacecraft, with astronaut Yang Liwei aboard and Yang has become China’s first astronaut. Yang and his spacecraft orbited the earth 14 times during about 21 hours before he safely landed in north China the next day. The successful launch and return of the spacecraft made China the third country in space after Russia and the

United States, and this marked the great success of the manned space program of China. 题四： Dear Jim,

How are things going?

On November 21st, 2008 I went to a concert held in the Capital Stadium. The concert was given by Emil Chau, a singer from Taiwan. Chau was born in Hongkong in December, 1960 and showed

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his music talent at an early age. His first album came out in 1984. Since then he has made many albums and has continued giving great performances on stage at home and abroad. His song “Friend” became well-known to each household.

Throughout the concert, there was not an empty seat anywhere in the Stadium, and the atmosphere was extremely exciting. The audience sang along to nearly every song.

I was greatly impressed by Chau’s brilliant music and singing. While I watched and listened, I knew that I was seeing the performance of a real superstar. This is the best concert that I will remember forever.

Yours, 题五：

Jay Chou (周杰伦)

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