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plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it’s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we’d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.

In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner! Thank you.

Wang Dong

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇环保的倡议书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should ...，So it’s quite necessary to...，we’d better....，if everyone tries his best to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词使文章前后连贯，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，适当的补充一些保护环境的措施。 【写作亮点】

本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了倡议书的目的是保护环境，接下来介绍保护环境的措施：种树、不要乱扔垃圾、节约用水，骑自行车或步行外出，最后阐述自己的观点，要尽力保护环境。此处remember not to do sth, as we all know, turn off, had better, try one’s best to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

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假如你是张明,你是学校“环保俱乐部” (Saving the Environment Club) 的志愿者。上周六，你们俱乐部组织了志愿者活动。请给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，并注意书信格式。80词左右. 其内容包括：

1、介绍自己是环保俱乐部的自愿者。

2、活动内容有：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。 3、当我们完成所有工作后都感觉很累，但却觉得很快乐,很有成就感。 4、我认为做一名志愿者非常不错。

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____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Ben,

I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.

Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.

I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.

What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者给你的笔友Ben写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边，例如，拒绝一次性纸杯，随手关掉电灯，使用布做的购物袋，尽量骑自行车出行……请以“How to Be a Greener Person”为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】

How to be a Greener Person

It’s our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rs—reduce, reuse and recycle—are important. I think we’d better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when we are not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, we’d better take a cloth bag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldn’t throw things away if they can be reused, repaired or recycled. It’s important for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful. 【解析】

试题分析：环境保护的文体是中考常考的主题，对于本文的写作学生首先开门见山指出保护环境是非常重要的，是我们的责任，可以利用it作为形式主语的句式来展开；然后，对环境保护应该如何做进行阐述如拒绝一次性纸杯，随手关掉电灯，使用布做的购物袋，尽量骑自行车出行，保护动植物，防止工厂的排污等，从这几方面进行展开论述。句式上可以使用we’d better，It’s important for us to，We are supposed to 等来阐述所写的内容。最后，一句话进行总结，说明如果这样做世界将会变得更美more and more beautiful。考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于要做的几件事情，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。

1. Some of us put up posters. 2. Some handed out advertisements.

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3. We also helped clean up the city parks.

4. we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.

5. In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner! 6. Only by doing these simple things can we protect our environment well。 7. With the development of industrialization, more and more factories are built.

8. To protect our environment, the government began to levy a tax on the companies and factories. 9. Last but not least, we can share our ideas with people to let them join us. 10. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor.

11. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. 12. Only in this way can we live happily.

13. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. 14. I hope everyone will care about the environment.

15. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.

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The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

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2018 年 1 月 1 日， 这一举措引发重庆人民的关注。我国开始向企业征收环保税。请就此新闻，写一篇 评论。 参考要点：

1. 政府征收环保税有哪些原因； 2. 环保税开征后重庆将会发生哪些变化； 3. 从个人角度说明应为环保做哪些贡献。 要求：

1. 要点齐全，语言流畅；

2. 80 —120 词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

On January 1st, the government began to levy a tax on (征税) the companies and factories which cause pollution. People in Chongqing pay close attention to it.

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