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difficult, not hating; blueprints, not rhetoric; words and simple, but full of love, truth, passion, entrepreneurial passion. Take this opportunity, my inspirational quotes Li Dazhao's classic \se in uplifting blend with the article\a view on how to do well under the new situation of township and village leaders inspire and help, and also share with you. A good play to create iron shoulders strong arms, to assume the burden be passed; only specific qualities, will it be possible in specific areas to create a world. In my view, village chiefs in the new situation, we must first have five basic quality. One ambition is to pioneer. \andsome.\h-minded can stimulate the flow of momentum to become brave and persistent, become quiet and powerful. Township and village party \ders\n their respective jurisdictions, political stability and economic and social development issues, decisions and orientation depends to a large extent because of your. Everybody in village chiefs and the positions, both the trust of the masses, the Organization's trust, more ability to you, fully affirmed the moral and other qualities. Therefore, we must always maintain thehistorical mission and social responsibility, and our ideal tree rooted in the hard work of the soil, with indomitable spirit, indomitable courage to open up a new situation of villages and towns. To have a feeling of closeness to the second. \people and country.\Our business foundation in the people's blood in the people power people. Advanced decisions of the party cadres to the feelings of the people is an eternal theme. Fan Zhong-yan, called \s\ng Banqiao's also wrote a \a Chai lay listening to the rustling of bamboo, the suspect is suffering. Cao County officials, little my, a total turn off. \n has so feelings, alone we is to\ng \s of people servant does? we more should always hold with on people of deep feelings, heart Department masses of leading visited tea, care masses of emotions thoughts complained, always insisted put masses of interests put in first, consciously from itself do up, from small do up, from masses most care, and most directly, and most reality of interests problem grabbed, real do love for people by Department, and right for people by with, and Lee for people by conspiracy to. Three with the fame of mind. \serenity not go far.\on to fame is morality, is the sublimation of the soul. As Township and village, be sure to maintain a normal state of mind, establish a correct viewpoint on power, position and values and Outlook, as fame is light like water, depending ... 50 km, also red and like hundreds of thousands of the KMT military combat, but he went on to collect a variety of newspapers and magazines, and then race against time to pore over. As long as the study of mind, it is not necessary to come to the library, workshops, into the villages, people learned farming techniques, problem-solving methods, participation in2011年高考寓言类材料作文的审题立意指导

一、高考题型回放

南太平洋小岛上,有很多绿海龟孵化小龟的沙穴。一天黄昏,一只幼龟探头探脑地爬出来。一只老鹰直冲下来要叼走它。一位好心的游客发现了它,连忙跑过去赶走老鹰,护着小龟爬进大海。可是,意想不到的事情发生了,沙穴里成群的幼龟鱼贯而出——原来,先出来的那幼龟是个“侦察兵”,一旦遇到危险,它便缩回去,现在它安全到达大海,错误的信息使幼龟们争先恐后地爬到毫无遮挡的海滩。好心的游客走了,原先那只等待时机的老鹰又再回来了,其他老鹰也跟过来了。 要求选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题;不要脱离材料内容及做含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。

二、寓言的含义及特点

寓言,是用假托的故事或自然物的拟人手法来说明某个道理或教训的文学作品,一般具有讽刺或训诫的性质。它具有三个特点即:

隐喻性,借用虚构的故事情境,而不直接说明道理;

多义性,因看待事物的角度不一,对于同一个事物,往往见仁见智; 哲理性 ,寓言在于讽喻、劝戒、启迪人们,寄予深刻道理。

三、寓言类材料的审题 (1)把握整体寓意

具体操作时需要精读材料,提取揭示寓意的关键语句。(一般来说,记叙类的找出议论抒情性的句子,议论类的找出观点句),明确材料主旨(寓意)

要从整体上把握寓言的主旨,不能“只见树木,不见森林”。一般来说,一则材料中所包含的主要的、核心的含义,也就是这则材料的“主旨”所在。读懂寓言,理解寓意是作文的关键。 (2)围绕寓意,拓展思路,由假托的故事作相似联想,联想人生、社会等,根据材料主旨确定立意。

(3)多角度思考

充分挖掘材料内涵,找出材料中的陈述对象。找出每个陈述对象的在事件中所产生的结果。 (4)由果及因,为什么会产生这样的结果,在此基础上正面提出中心论点。

onferences, learned superiors policies; reports, you can learn to deal with problems, art, just wanted to learn, to learn at any time. To continuously expand the scope of the study. The complexity and comprehensiveness of our work, decided to not only do we want to be \professionals\dabble in different areas of knowledge. Mastery of knowledge not only to have knowledge to rational analysis. This on requirements we, not only to learning national of route, and approach, and policy, also to learning national of legal, and regulations; not only to with political theory armed mind, also to with economic theory guide work; not only to read history, also to read history; not only to absorption SM of mirror, also to gets is of road; not only to from local learn, also to to outside learn; not only to to books learn, also to field study learn. Therefore, I would encourage you, and more to the outside world when I have time to take a look at, take a stroll, outside developments, learn other people's development approach, and then come back to guide our work. Second, we must think. \ning without thought to overshadow, thinking without learning is perilous.\nt to foster the character ofadvancing with the times, forge ahead, often reflect themselves in adapting to the new situation on whether there are delays, have anything to fear in the reform and innovation, whether in terms of accelerating the development of a relaxation, keep promising State of mind. In order to do investigations, investigations is the road to heaven, God disposes of the base. To wants to real heard truth, and justice to truth, and get truth, received effectiveness, on must in-depth actual, and outreach, and in-depth masses, worship masses for Division, and masses heart, with masses with discussion everyone care of problem, listening they of calls, understand they of mood, feel they of suffering, summary they of experience, concentrated they of wisdom, especially on masses most hope, and most urgent, and most worries, and most complained of hot, and difficulties and focus problem, more to active research, caught not put. Dare to innovate, in our work, often remain \old way doesn't work, the new approach would not\on, the reason, the key is that many people know that copying other people's ideas, mechanically, using someone else's old ways. o change this predicament, requires us to break the shackles oftraditional concepts to overcome conservative, conformist, good at finding new problems and to accept new things, summarize new experience, new ideas, developing new programmes and Maverick, a new approach to solve problems, speed up development. Especially in implement superior policy spirit of process in the, both implementation, and cannot mechanically, to to extraordinary of courage and develop enterprising of spirit, put flexibility and principle combined up, put superior of spirit and local reality combined up, Yong conspiracy to breakthrough of policy, and exercise innovation of lift, developed out development works of, and grass-roots welcomes ofdifficult, not hating; blueprints, not rhetoric; words and simple, but full of love, truth, passion, entrepreneurial passion. Take this opportunity, my inspirational quotes Li Dazhao's classic \se in uplifting blend with the article\a view on how to do well under the new situation of township and village leaders inspire and help, and also share with you. A good play to create iron shoulders strong arms, to assume the burden be passed; only specific qualities, will it be possible in specific areas to create a world. In my view, village chiefs in the new situation, we must first have five basic quality. One ambition is to pioneer. \h-minded can stimulate the flow of momentum to become brave and persistent, become quiet and powerful. Township and village party \ders\n their respective jurisdictions, political stability and economic and social development issues, decisions and orientation depends to a large extent because of your. Everybody in village chiefs and the positons, both the trust of the masses, the Organization's trust, more ability to you, fully affirmed the moral and other qualities. Therefore, we must always maintain thehistorical mission and social responsibility, and our ideal tree rooted in the hard work of the soil, with indomitable spirit, indomitable courage to open up a new situation of villages and towns. To have a feeling of closeness to the second. \people and country.\Our business foundation in the people's blood in the people power people. Advanced decisions of the party cadres to the feelings of the people is an eternal theme. Fan Zhong-yan, called \s\ng Banqiao's also wrote a \a Chai lay listening to the rustling of bamboo, the suspect is suffering. Cao County officials, little my, a total turn off. \n has so feelings, alone we is to\ng \s of people servant does? we more should always hold with on people of deep feelings, heart Department masses of leading visited tea, care masses of emotions thoughts complained, always insisted put masses of interests put in first, consciously from itself do up, from small do up, from masses most care, and most directly, and most reality of interests problem grabbed, real do love for people by Department, and right for people by with, and Lee for people by conspiracy to. Three with the fame of mind. \serenity not go far.\on to fame is morality, is the sublimation of the soul. As Township and village, be sure to maintain a normal state of mind, establish a correct viewpoint on power, position and values and Outlook, as fame is light like water, depending ... 50 km, also red and like hundreds of thousands of the KMT military combat, but he went on to collect a variety of newspapers and magazines, and then race against time to pore over. As long as the study of mind, it is not necessary to come to the library, workshops, into the villages, people learned farming techniques, problem-solving methods, participation in

四、审题训练:阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。

山石对卵石说:我才是真正的石头。你看我体肤糙砺,棱角分明,血性方刚,我们才能构成雄壮的大山,凝成挺拔的峰峦,展现自然的粗犷。

卵石对山石说:经年累月,水蚀沙磨,我体肤平滑,肌理莹润,虽已脱胎换骨,不还是石头吗?脱离了大山,我却有机会走进人间,装点人们的生活。

要求:选择一个角度构思作文,自主确定立意,确定文体,确定标题;不要脱离材料内容及含义的范围作文;不要套作,不得抄袭。

(一)审题指导

1.这是命题作文,话题作文,还是材料作文?这类作文在审题立意方面要注意什么? 2.材料中“山石”与“卵石”对话的重点是什么? 3.我们可以从哪几个角度入手来构思作文?

(二)题意阐述

这是一篇材料作文。材料以寓言的形式设计了山石与卵石的对话。他们对话的关键是怎样看待自己与别人。

从对话来看,山石对卵石很是不屑,认为卵石细小,不如它自己高大挺拔;认为卵石体肤平滑,肌理莹润,不如它自己体肤糙砺,楞角分明,血性方刚。山石在卵石的面前,是骄傲的、自信的。这些固然没错,但山石的不足在于,它在看到自己高大雄奇、充满阳刚之气的同时,不应当对同出一源的卵石采取排斥、鄙视的态度。大千世界的事物存在的形态是各不相同的,美的呈现方式是多种多样的。大固然可敬,小也有其存在的价值。山石的口气比较霸气,唯我独尊,唯我独优,毫无谦逊,这不是一种值得认可的为人之道。山石的傲气、霸气值得一评。对山石既可正面立论,肯定它的自信、它的豪气;也可反面立论,批评它的傲气、霸气、偏见,等等。

跟山石相比,卵石就显得温和许多。但卵石在高大的山石面前,并没有失去自信,并没有丧失自我,它据理力争,柔中带刚,阐说自己苦难的经历,阐说自己也有独特之美,阐说自己“走进人间,装点人们的生活”的实际贡献。跟傲气的山石相比,人们往往把爱意更多地投向了卵石。因此对卵石一般宜正面立论。

文章既可整体综合立意,将山石与卵石相互比照提出观点,也可选点立意,从山石或卵石的所具有的某一个小点立意,引申开去。

(三)立意角度的探究

onferences, learned superiors policies; reports, you can learn to deal with problems, art, just wanted to learn, to learn at any time. To continuously expand the scope of the study. The complexity and comprehensiveness of our work, decided to not only do we want to be \professionals\dabble in different areas of knowledge. Mastery of knowledge not only to have knowledge to rational analysis. This on requirements we, not only to learning national of route, and approach, and policy, also to learning national of legal, and regulations; not only to with political theory armed mind, also to with economic theory guide work; not only to read history, also to read history; not only to absorption SM of mirror, also to gets is of road; not only to from local learn, also to to outside learn; not only to to books learn, also to field study learn. Therefore, I would encourage you, and more to the outside world when I have time to take a look at, take a stroll, outside developments, learn other people's development approach, and then come back to guide our work. Second, we must think. \ning without thought to overshadow, thinking without learning is perilous.\nt to foster the character ofadvancing with the times, forge ahead, often reflect themselves in adapting to the new situation on whether there are delays, have anything to fear in the reform and innovation, whether in terms of accelerating the development of a relaxation, keep promising State of mind. In order to do investigations, investigations is the road to heaven, God disposes of the base. To wants to real heard truth, and justice to truth, and get truth, received effectiveness, on must in-depth actual, and outreach, and in-depth masses, worship masses for Division, and masses heart, with masses with discussion everyone care of problem, listening they of calls, understand they of mood, feel they of suffering, summary they of experience, concentrated they of wisdom, especially on masses most hope, and most urgent, and most worries, and most complained of hot, and difficulties and focus problem, more to active research, caught not put. Dare to innovate, in our work, often remain \old way doesn't work, the new approach would not\on, the reason, the key is that many people know that copying other people's ideas, mechanically, using someone else's old ways. o change this predicament, requires us to break the shackles oftraditional concepts to overcome conservative, conformist, good at finding new problems and to accept new things, summarize new experience, new ideas, developing new programmes and Maverick, a new approach to solve problems, speed up development. Especially in implement superior policy spirit of process in the, both implementation, and cannot mechanically, to to extraordinary of courage and develop enterprising of spirit, put flexibility and principle combined up, put superior of spirit and local reality combined up, Yong conspiracy to breakthrough of policy, and exercise innovation of lift, developed out development works of, and grass-roots welcomes of.

若从“石头”的角度,正面立论的话,肯定“棱角分明”的石头是一种本色之美、个性之美,可以有以下立意:①保持本色之美②追求人生的个性之美,活出精彩③做人应“棱角分明”,刚直,充满阳刚之气,等等。

从反面立论,批评山石对同出一源的卵石采取排斥、鄙视的态度,唯我独尊,唯我独优,看不到别人的优点的傲气、霸气、偏见,等等。

若从“卵石”的角度,“圆润光滑”的卵石则是一种雕饰、圆通之美,代表了社会生活中的那些温和、成熟、稳重之人。可以有以下立意:①圆通是人生的一种艺术②人应在学会与他人、社会的融合中,变得成熟、稳重等等。

从“卵石”的“经年累月,水蚀沙磨,我体肤平滑,肌理莹润”特点,可以立意为“磨练”等。

若结合“山石”“卵石”两个方面的特点,可以有以下立意:

1.从山石与卵石都坚守本质的角度——

山石与卵石都是石头,它们的遭际各不相同,却都没有改变自己的本质与内涵,都有着各自存在的价值。

2.从山石与卵石不同价值取向的角度——

(1)……人也一样,价值取向不同,人生经历不同,却都能演绎一段别样人生。 (2)不同形式,同样实现自身的价值

3.从山石与卵石姿态不同却和谐共生的角度——

(1)山石无棱角无以显壮美,卵石不圆润无以显温柔,它们都在各自的位置上美丽着。每一块石都有自己的位置,它们都抛弃了平庸,成就了伟大。平凡不是错,只要活出属于自己精彩,活出自己个性,生命就有价值。

(2)在保持本色之美\\个性之美的同时,学会圆通,倡导融合,提倡和谐。

(3)大千世界万千之美/物尽其材各有所用/异样人生/异态之美/不要拘泥一种形态…… 4.从两石需相辅相成、取长补短的角度——

(1)“糙砺”和“莹润”结合,才能成就完美的人生。(2)刚柔相济。 范文:

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