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How to write a good topic Sentence?

写作模式 (benefits of doing sth.) 1) As one of my most rewarding experiences, doing something has brought/can bring a lot of benefits to my life. (topic sentence)

Detail 1 2) For one thing, …(理由I) 3)Unlike…,it offers me much freedom to。。。 Detail 2 4) For another…(理由II) 5)Through…, I have more chances to…

Detail 3 6) And the most amazing result of doing so is that…(理由III) 7)Now I tend to …

Conclusion 8) In sum, there is not anything in …(my life) that is more beneficial than doing sth.

Reference model:

Chatting Online —My Most Rewarding Experience

1) As one of my most rewarding experiences, chatting online has brought a lot of benefits to my life.

2) For one thing, it helps me avoid nervousness and embarrassment I used to feel in regular talks. 3) Unlike the face-to-face conversation, it offers me much freedom in time to think out my ideas and prepare them well before posting them on the screen. 4) For another, it adds no little to the improvement of my English. 5) Through online chatting, I have more chances to speak with native speakers, thus bathing myself in the sea of genuine English. 6) The most valuable result of chatting online is that it gives me insights into other cultures and keeps my mind open to better ways of seeing things. 7) Now I tend to see things from a more objective perspective. 8) In short, there is not anything in my free time that is more beneficial than chatting online.

写作模式（影响分析）(impact/influences/effects of doing sth.)

1) The effects / influences / impacts / mark of sth. on our life / society are (is) positive/ negative/ profound/ far-reaching / a mixed one.（主题句）. 2) On the one hand, ……(分析I). 3) ……(进一步阐述). 4） On the other, (分析II). 5) …… (进一步阐述). 6) On the whole,_______ (分析III). 7)……(进一步阐述). 8) Therefore, _________(结尾句).

Reference model:

The Effects of SARS upon Our Society

The effects of SARS on our society are both negative and positive. 2) On the one hand, it has brought about a heavy loss to our economy. 3) According to the official report, it is a foregone conclusion that there is a great loss in such industries as transportation, food, recreation, and tourism. 4) On the other, it will serve as a reminder of what the healthy lifestyle should be like. 5) We will think of it when we spit anywhere, when we help ourselves to wild game, and when we are careless of our personal hygiene. 6) On the whole, SARS has made a great difference to our

long-honored ways of seeing things. 7) Despite our efforts, for example, our wish to better economy has invited heavy losses in it as a result of our ignorance of other

factors, such as the attack of SARS. 8) Although SARS is bound to die out, therefore, its influences will not fade away in the years to come.

写作模式Topic Sentence (importance/significance of doing sth.)

1) The importance of sth. is now drawing more of our concern than ever before.(topic sentence)

Analysis 1 2) To begin with, it has a strong hold on … 3)…(进一步阐述) Analysis2 4) Besides, it serves as a litmus test for… 5)…(进一步阐述) Analysis3 6) And most of all, it has the power to determine whether or not… 7)…(进一步阐述)

Conclusion 8) In short, where there is a better employment of sth., there will be more hope of…

Reference model:

The Importance of Body Language to Our Success in Social Contact The importance of body language to our success in social contact is now drawing more of our concern than ever before. 2) To begin with, it has a strong hold on the reactions of others to us . 3) What we tend to show through our eyes, faces, bodies and gestures often brings about a chain of reactions from others, ranging from appreciation to disgust. 4) Besides, it serves as a litmus test(试金石)for our true feelings. 5) Every time we make insincere remarks, our facial expressions, the tones of our voices and even our posture may reveal more to others than our speech. 6) And most of all, it has the power to determine whether or not we will succeed in social contact. 7) If you have a decisive date with a girl / boy and your manners or the way you conduct yourself doesn’t match your social status, for example, your chances of winning the other’s heart will be slim. 8) In short, where there is a better exercise of body language in social contact, there will be more hope of success.

写作模式 (refuting sth.)（批驳分析）

1) Doing sth. / Sth. is so popular in our society that many people regard it as a natural thing we have to live with.(错误观点) 2) Underlying their view is the ground that …(理由I) 3) Furthermore, they argue that …(理由II)However, as far as I am concerned, we should… (topic sentence)

4) On the one hand, a deeper insight into the problem, can find that …(批驳分析I) 5）If allowed to run its course, it would …(进一步阐述) 6）On the other hand, …(批驳分析II) 7) It must be kept in mind that … (进一步阐述) 8) Thus, no room is to be left for (doing) sth. in our society. Reference model:

Should We Leave Some Room for Cheating on Exams in Our Society?

1) Nowadays, cheating in exams is so popular on campus that many people regard it as a natural thing we have to live with. 2) Underlying their view is the ground that any struggle against it will give rise to more sophisticated methods of cheating, like burning the grass that comes back to life in spring winds. 3) Furthermore, they argue that the cheaters’ success in the college entrance examinations did not come by easily and they will forever lose the chance of further education if they are expelled from school. However, as far as I am concerned, we should leave no room for cheating on exams in our society.

4) On the one hand, a deeper insight into the problem, however, can find that those keen on this have formed a raging current, which is eating away at the foundations of our values and moralities in education. 5) If allowed to run its course, this current, with more and more students getting involved in it, would become stronger and stronger until there would be little that we can do about it. 6) On the other hand, a severe punishment for cheating on exams can bring both honesty and fair competition back into our campus life. 7) It must be kept in mind that the purpose of our education is not to preserve every student’s false mask but to build up their self-confidence for the sake of future competition. 8) Thus, no room is to be left for cheating on exams in our society.

课堂上练习的主题句写作：

My Views on Job-hopping

Please write down the first paragraph on the topic

My Views on Job-hopping

1. Many people are inclined to do one job in their lives, while others may not hesitate to hop to a more suitable one.

2. Some stick to doing his best in one job so as to be professional in the field, whereas others argue that change means challenge and progress.

3. In my opinion, fixed or flexible job does not count. Rat her, one’s job must fit to his interest and ability.