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考研帮学堂电子配套讲义变得脚踏实地,对自己的能力和价值观采取更理性客观的态度。最后,还有一个不可被忽略的事实,年轻人已经越来越强调生活方式的选择,而不仅仅是钱的问题。通过上文的讨论,我们可以得出一个结论,这个趋势是很正常的,也是可以被接受的。所以,公众不必太过焦虑和不安。第四章语言优化十二法则

第一节语言优化十二法则(一)

1.被动句【详解】“英文多被动,汉语多主动”,还需要警惕名词与动词之间暗含的“主被动”关系。Eg1:表建议(Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Eg2:据说/相传(Itissaidthat…Eg3:Isuggestthat…(Itissuggestedthat…Eg4:Studentsshouldstudyhard.(Studentsareexpected/well-advisedtostudyhard.Eg5:他们家生了一个小孩。(Ababywasbornintheirfamily.Eg6:中国结最初是由手工艺人发明的。(TheChineseknotwasoriginallyinventedbythehandicraftsman(peoplewhomadehandcrafts).Eg7:剪纸被用来装饰门窗和房间(Papercuttingsareusedtodecoratedoors,windowsandrooms.2.名词从句名词从句:即从句充当名词的功能,含主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句四种。A.主语从句:Eg1:WhatworriesmanyparentsisthatInternetorcomputergamesmayimpactkids’study.Eg2:ItissaidthatanemperorofancientChinadiscoveredTea5,000yearsago.(it为形式主语;that从句为真正主语)B.宾语从句:Eg1:ManyAmericansliveoncredit,andtheirqualityoflifeismeasuredbyhowmuchtheycanborrow,notbyhowmuchtheycanearn.第23页考研帮学堂电子配套讲义Eg2:Iamconvincedthatitisofgreatnecessityforyoungsterstostudyhard.Eg3:明智的人不为别人的想法所影响。—>Thesensiblemanisnotinfluencedbywhatotherpeoplethink.C表语从句:Eg1:ThatiswhyChinaiscalledthe“KingdomofBicycles”.Eg2:Youarewhatyoueat.Eg3:Inteamgames,practiceiswhatimprovesoursenseofcooperation.D同位语从句:Eg1:(MartinLutherKing)Ihaveadreamthatonedaythisnationwillriseupandliveoutthetruemeaningofitscreed:\holdthesetruthstobeself-evident,thatallmenarecreatedequal.\(该句中adream=that从句,)Eg2:Othersholdthedifferentideathatonlineshoppingbringsussomeproblems.3.定语从句步骤:1)先写出正确简单句,确定被修饰成分(中心名词)2)在中心名词后加入定从,关系词who,whose,whom,where,which,whenEg1.Taobaoisaparticularlypopularwebsite.—>Taobaoisaparticularlypopularwebsite,where/inwhichcustomerscanpurchasevariousgoods.Eg2:IwilladvicemyforeignfriendtovisitGreatWall,whereheorshecanacquireknowledgeofChinesehistory.4.含同位语句式A.人—>身份Eg.Iamconvincedthat…—>Asacollegestudent,Iamconvincedthat…—>I,asacollegestudent,amconvincedthat…B.物—>性质Eg.Astrongwillbringsuspower…—>Asavitalquality,astrongwillbringsuspower…—>Astrongwill,asavitalquality,bringsuspower…第24页考研帮学堂电子配套讲义5.it句式A.形式主语itis+被动/形容词/名词+that从句/todo…Eg1:Itissuggested/well-advised/supposed/proposedthatsb.should(not)do…Eg2:Itisessential/necessary/advisable/convenient/difficult/hard/comfortableforsb.(not)todoEg3:Itisessential/necessarythatsb.should(not)do…Eg4:Itisuseless/usefuldoingsth.B.形式宾语Eg1:Anincreasingnumberofstudentsfinditdifficulttospellcommonwordscorrectly.Eg2:Anincreasingnumberofparentsfindithardtohaveopportunitiestochatwithkids,whospendtoomuchtimeoncomputers.Eg3:Ahostofyoungstersfinditratherboringandhardtounderstandliterature.6.therebe:(客观存在)Eg1:(表危害主题句)Obviously,thereareseveralnegativeimpactswhichcannotbeignored.Eg2:(表原因主题句)Evidently,thereareseveralreasonsaccountingfor/responsibleforthisphenomenon.Eg3:(表建议主题句)Iamconvincedthatthereareseveralwaysinwhichparentscanhelpkidstobeindependent.第二节语言优化十二法则(二)

7.强调句A.强调谓语Eg1:Iloveyou.—>Idoloveyou.—>Ididloveyou.Eg2:Cellphone/Internet/computerbringsusconvenience.—>Cellphone/Internet/computerdoesbringusconvenience.B.强调句式:Itis/was+被强调成分+that/who+句子其他成分。【步骤】第25页考研帮学堂电子配套讲义a.先写出正确的简单句、并列句或复合句,明确单句的各个成分。b.在被强调成分(除谓语和补语外)两边添加itis/was和that/who,其他成分不变,必要时调整顺序。【强调句式特征】去掉itis/was…that/who结构,整个句子无冗余或成分残缺。Eg1:MymotheralwaysencouragesmenottoloseheartwhenIhavedifficultiesinstudy.—>Itismymotherwho/thatalwaysencouragesmenottoloseheartwhenIhavedifficultiesinstudy.—>ItiswhenIhavedifficultiesinstudythatmymotheralwaysencouragesmenottoloseheart.Eg2:Parents’protectiondoesnotenablekidstobuildupadequateabilitytofacesocialcompetition.—>(强调句式否定形式)Itisparents’protectionthatdoesnotenablekidstobuildupadequateabilitytofacesocialcompetition.Eg3:TheInternetdoesnotenablesomeyoungsterstospendadequatetimeinchattingwithothersfacetoface.—>ItistheInternetthatdoesnotenablesomeyoungsterstospendadequatetimeinchattingwithothersfacetoface.8.倒装A.表否定的副词、短语或状语位于主语之前或句首,主句半倒装(一般疑问句语序);如never,seldom,hardly,scarcely,little,onnoaccount,bymomeans,innocase,Eg1:Iwillneveragree.—>NeverwillIagree.B.Only+状语位于句首,主句半倒装。Eg1:Whenmybelovedisbesidemyself,Icanfeelthetruehappiness.—>Onlywhenmybelovedisbesidemyself,canIfeelthetruehappiness.Eg2:Whenhiscomputercrashes,hewillcomedown-stairsforsomethingtoeat.—>Onlywhenhiscomputercrashes,willhecomedown-stairsforsomethingtoeat.Eg3:Bydoingsmallthings,teenagerscanaccumulateabilityandexperienceforsomethingbig.—>Onlydoingsmallthing,canteenagersaccumulateabilityandexperienceforsomethingbig.C.As/though倒装形式Eg1:Althoughsheisagirl,ZengYikeiscalledBrotherZeng.—>Girlassheis,ZengYikeiscalledBrotherZeng.Eg2:Thoughitisconvenient,onlineshoppingleadstosomeproblems.—>Convenientas/thoughitis,onlineshoppingleadstosomeproblems.第26页考研帮学堂电子配套讲义Eg3:Althoughitissimple,whatthepictureconveysisthought-provoking.—>Simpleasitis,whatthepictureconveysisthought-provoking.9.双重否定Eg1:no____is/aremore_____than________.—>Incontemporarysociety,nomeansofcommunicationismorepopularandcommonthancellphones.Eg2:Astrongwillisveryimportant.—>Theimportanceofastrongwillcannotbetooemphasized.Eg3:Educationhelpspeopletoacquireknowledge,skillsandnewvisions.—>Withouteducation,itisimpossibleforpeopletoacquireknowledge,skillsandnewvisions.10.Ving/ved状语A.两个动作同时发生且主语一致,将次要动作写成v-ing或v-ed形式做状语,即动作与逻辑主语之间为主动关系时写成v-ing形式、为被动关系是写成V-ed形式。Eg1:Iclimbedthestairs.Itookasuitcase.—>Iclimbedthestairs,takingasuitcase.—>Climbingthestairs,Itookasuitcase.Eg2.Whentheyarecomparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinseveralways.—>Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinseveralways.—>Bicycles,comparedwithcars,aresuperiorinseveralways.B.两个动作主语一致,但前后发生,则可将先发生的动作写成Having+ved形式。Eg1:Hehadlivedinthiscityforyears.Hehadnodifficultyfindingthewayhome.—>Havinglivedinthiscityforyears,hehadnodifficultyfindingthewayhome.11.排比结构(parallelism)Eg1:Studiesservefordelight,forornamentandforability.(Bacon)Eg2:Weshallfightonthehills.Weshallfightinthestreets.Weshallfightbloodandsweetandtears.(Churchill)Eg3:作为一种重要素质,自信带给我们力量、唤起我们对生活的热爱、帮助我们战胜困难。—>Asavitalquality,confidencebringsuspower,arousesourenthusiasmforlife,andhelpsustoconquerdifficulties.第27页考研帮学堂电子配套讲义12.含插入语句式插入语(Parenthesis)是插在句子中的一个词、短语或从句,通常被逗号、破折号或句子的其他部分隔开,它与句子的其他部分之间没有语法上的关系。Eg1:AsIsee,thecausesofthisphenomenonarediverse.—>Thecausesofthisphenomenon,asIsee,arediverse.Eg2:Allofasudden,thesilenceofthelakewasbrokenbyascream.—>Thesilenceofthelake,allofasudden,wasbrokenbyascream.Eg3:Evenso,othersholdadifferentview.—>Others,evenso,holdadifferentview.Eg4:Likeanythingelse,automobileshavemorethanoneside.(汽车跟很多其他事物一样,具有两面性)—>Automobiles,likeanythingelse,havemorethanoneside.第28页