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One possible version:
As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”And also at the moment, Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber. So Arthur didn’t stop, but continued to run until he saw a taxi. He stopped it, jumped in with the suit case and said to the driver, “Go to the police station, please. The man shouting behind is the bank thief!’’ The taxi raced away like the wind.
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened. Obviously, the police had already learned about the robbery. They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside, as Arthur had expected. Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase. Later, with the information, the police caught the robber. The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot. (Words 153)
Another possible version:
As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Thinking of the way the young man had behaved, he realized the young man might be the bank robber. So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi. The moment he got into the taxi, he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station. The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.
The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in. Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on the Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police, he heard a voice outside, “Help! Help!” To the surprise of Arthur, it was the young man. He had followed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes. Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words: 158) 【范文点拨】 原文所给关键词分类: 地点:Park Avenue, the bank
人物:The young man, people, the bank thief
事件:suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, robbery, the shouts 在续写时,除了注意原文给出的关键词,还需要注意以下线索: 1. Why did the young man look worried?
2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.
3. Arthur became frightened and without another thought, he started to run. 二、题型解读 读后续写 1. 题型介绍 ◆选材特点
(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;
(2)多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。 ◆评分参考
主要考虑以下内容:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度; (2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况; (3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性; (4)上下文的连贯性。
2. 考查能力
一是把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。 二是语言运用的准确性和丰富性。 三是对语篇结构的把控能力。 四是创造性思维能力。 3.续写特点
(1)读后续写不是随心所欲,是要在引导语(开头语)和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。如《考试说明》样题中规定“应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语(10处)”。
这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示,如人物、地点、事件,但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用。这样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主权。另外,所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语,即:不能另起炉灶。这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似,在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面发展。
(2)续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但是,故事线索的逻辑性比较强。这样考生能够根据提示词语,顺着原来文章的思路续写文章,并适当发散。
(3)读后续写要求读写并重。与阅读理解题一样,读后续写同样需要对本篇文章精确理解,这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题,就这方面而言有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的推断,如“What would happen next?”。
(4)所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的,考生可以根据自己对文章的理解,从而对文章的结尾有不同的诠释。如《考试说明》中读后续写的样题的结尾,考生可以理解为这个年轻人是银行抢劫者,而Arthur因此成为一个大英雄;考生也可以理解为这个年轻人不是一个银行抢劫者,结果产生了误会。 4.续写步骤
(1)精读文章,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等,这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜(结尾)”。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生做到“心中有数”。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路,结合段首的提示语,最终确定续写段落的思路,同时结合文章划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
(5)标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时,务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。