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专题五 短文改错 第1讲 词法错误

[真题演练] Passage 1

(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)(导学号 58210041)

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor's orders，so once I started the car，my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

答案：

eighteen

In the summer holiday following my birthday，I took driving lessons.I

eighteenth

still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car，I

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once I started the car，

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thought I had learned the instructor's orders，

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my mind blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept

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repeating the ，“Speed up！”“Slow down！”“ left！”I was so much

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【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者学车第一天的经历。

71．解析：词法错误。表达多少岁生日用序数词，因此eighteen应该改为eighteenth。 答案：eighteen→eighteenth

72．解析：词法错误。句意：我仍然记得第一天有多艰难。表示第几天，序数词前要加

1

late

，later

suddenly

sudden

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定冠词the或者用限定词进行修饰。

答案：first之前加the或my

73．解析：行文逻辑错误。根据前后句意思可知这里表示转折概念，并非因果，所以把so改为but或yet。

答案：so→but/yet

74．解析：句法错误。文章描述过去的经历，上下文均使用了相应的过去时态，这里应保持一致，用一般过去时，所以把goes改为went。

答案：goes→went

75．解析：词法错误。根据后面引号内的内容可知word应该用复数形式words。 答案：word→words

76．解析：句法错误。根据前面教练发出的两个指令可知，这三个属于并列结构，都是祈使句，都以动词原形开头。

答案：Turning→Turn

77．解析：句法错误。这句话中含有so...that...(如此……以至于……)结构，故much在此处是多余的。

答案：去掉much

78．解析：词法错误。“一段时间＋later”表示多长时间之后，是固定用法。 答案：late→later

79．解析：词法错误。此处stop是名词，名词前用形容词修饰，所以把suddenly改为sudden。

答案：suddenly→sudden

80．解析：词法错误。in the middle of...意为“在……的中间”，是固定搭配。 答案：on→of

Passage 2

(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)

Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time，they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden，that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside，they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!

答案：

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Mr.and Mrs.Zhang work in our school.They live far from the school，

aand it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare

an/oneinterestingthat

time，they are in planting vegetables in their garden， is on the

interestedwhichrooftop of their house.They often get up together.They have also bought some useful

earlier

and water the vegetables

early

Beside

some gardening tools.，they often get

Besides

informationscame

from the Internet.When summer ，they will invite

informationcomes

their students pick the fresh vegetables!

【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了一对张氏夫妇的工作以及他们的业余爱好。

71．解析：词法错误。Mr.and Mrs.Zhang是两个人，故用both。因both在此作同位语，也可以去掉。all指的是三者或三者以上。

答案：all→both或去掉all

72．解析：词法错误。hour是以元音音素开头的单词，前面要用不定冠词an。表示“一个小时”可以用an hour也可以用one hour。

答案：a→an/one

73．解析：词法错误。interesting意为“有趣的”，多指事物；interested意为“感兴趣的”，多指人。该句的主语是they，故用interested。be interested in意为“对……感兴趣”。

答案：interesting→interested

74．解析：句法错误。此处是非限制性定语从句，应用which而不能用that引导。 答案：that→which

75．解析：行文逻辑错误。此处叙述他们经常早起这一事实，没有比较的意思，故不用比较级。

答案：earlier→early

76．解析：词法错误。表示“买某物”直接用buy sth.。buy还可用于buy sb.sth.或buy sth.for sb.，表示“为某人买某物”。

答案：去掉for

77．解析：词法错误。此处表示“此外，而且”，应用besides。beside“在……旁边”。

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