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【参考范文】 Dear Tom，

It's great to hear from you.I'm delighted to know you are interested in Chinese proverbs.

Chinese proverbs are summaries of people's wisdom and experience.They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by the folks and passed on orally generation by generation.

How can you learn Chinese proverbs? Well, books about the relevant topic are available online, which may give you a more specific explanation.If you have got some proverbs, try to recite one every day or combine them with your life.You can apply them to communicating with Chinese people around you.

I sincerely hope the above can be of some help.If you want to learn more, please let me know.

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua

【点评】 本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用了高级句式。如非谓语动词的使用：They are some brief and meaningful sentences created by the folks and passed on orally generation by generation.定语从句的使用：Well, books about the relevant topic are available online, which may give you a more specific explanation.

Passage 4(2019·深圳高三调研)

假定你是李华，你们学校的英国交换生Jeff准备参加“外国人讲中国成语(idiom)故事”比赛，他发邮件请你给予辅导。你回复邮件，内容包括：

1．答应帮助；

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2．提出建议；

3．询问辅导时间与地点。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Jeff，

Yours， Li Hua

【写作思路】 这是一篇应用文写作。

第一步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你们学校的英国交换生Jeff准备参加“外国人讲中国成语(idiom)故事”比赛，他发邮件请你给予辅导。你回复邮件，内容包括：1.答应帮助；2.提出建议；3.询问辅导时间与地点。

第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词(组)，如：reply to(回答)，the Chinese idiom story competition(中国成语故事比赛)，participate in(参加)，would like to(想要)；additionally(此外)；ancient myths(古代神话)等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

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第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，卷面要保持整洁美观。

【参考范文】 Dear Jeff，

I am writing to reply to your email regarding the Chinese idiom story competition you are going to participate in.It would be my great pleasure to help you prepare for the contest.

I would like to offer some suggestions before we meet.Firstly, as there are a great number of idioms to choose from, I recommend the most

commonly

used

ones

that

come

from

interesting

stories.Additionally, many idioms found roots in ancient myths or historical facts.Thus, I advise fully researching their meanings and origins to gain an instructive and fascinating insight into the cultural history of China.In this way, your storytelling will be highly impressive and appealing.

I hope the suggestions above can be of some help to you.Could you please tell me when and where you would like to meet? I look forward to further discussion with you.

Yours， Li Hua 【点评】 范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I am writing to reply to your email regarding the Chinese idiom story competition you are going to participate in.运用了定语从句；Firstly，as there are a great number of idioms to choose from, I recommend the most commonly used ones that come from interesting stories.运用了as引导的原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，

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文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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