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写作专练(六) 写作(共两节，满分35分) 第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) (2018·泰安一轮复习检测) Dear John， I'm so pleased to receive your email.I feel exciting to know you dream becoming a professional football player.I am looking forward to see an international football star，John.I'm surely you will succeed. As for me，teaching was my dream job.The reason for this is why I would like to share my knowledges with my students and help them solve problems.Besides，staying with students helps to keep me young.To realize my dream，I have to devote me to my study and enter an normal university. What will you do for your dream and who is your most favorite football player? Yours， Li Hua 【答案】 Dear John， I'm so pleased to receive your email.I feel exciting to know you exciteddream ∧ becoming a professional football player.I am looking of/aboutforward to see an international football star，John.I'm surely you will seeingsuresucceed. As for me，teaching was my dream job.The reason for this is why isknowledgethatI would like to share my knowledges with my students and help them solve problems.Besides，staying with students helps to keep me young.To realize my dream，I have to devote me to my study and enter an myselfanormal university. What will you do for your dream and who is your most favorite football player? Yours， Li Hua 第一处：考查形容词。此处修饰主语“I”，指人，应用excited。 第二处：考查固定搭配。dream of/about doing sth.意为“梦想做

某事”，为固定搭配。

第三处：考查非谓语动词。look forward to doing sth.意为“期望做某事”，为固定用法。

第四处：考查形容词。根据“I'm”可知，动词be后应接形容词作表语。

第五处：考查动词的时态和主谓一致。全文用的是一般现在时；且主语为“teaching”，所以应把was改为is。

第六处：考查名词性从句。此处引导表语从句，从句中不缺成分，故用连词that。

第七处：考查名词复数。knowledge是不可数名词，没有复数形式。

第八处：考查代词。devote oneself to sth.意为“致力于某事”；主语为“I”，所以反身代词应用myself。

第九处：考查冠词。normal的读音不以辅音音素开头；且此处泛指进入一所普通的大学。故用不定冠词a。

第十处：考查形容词的比较等级。favourite意为“最喜欢的”，无比较等级或最高级形式，所以去掉most。

第二节 书面表达(满分25分) (2018·湖北省八校高三第一次联考)

假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower，东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：

1．回复他的要求；

2．询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mark，

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Yours， Li Hua

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Dear_Mark， I'm very glad to have received your letter，saying that you would take part in the winter marathon race to be held in Wuhan on December 31.

①It is my pleasure to arrange for your accommodation and show you around some of the famous scenic spots here after the race.②I'll do my best to satisfy your needs and guarantee you a pleasant journey.Just tell me the exact time of your arrival and how long you will stay in your next letter，so that I can pick you up at the airport and make a proper arrangement.By the way，wish you good luck in the marathon race!

Looking forward to your early reply and your arrival.

Yours， Li_Hua 【一句多译】

①I'd be very delighted to arrange for your accommodation and show you around some places of interest here after the race.

②I'll do what I can to meet your need and make sure that you have a pleasant journey./I'll do everything I can to satisfy your need and provide you with a pleasant journey.