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学习点2 遇到这种混合类的话题，SIMON只是简单地说了下文章会说什么，并没有说明立场，也没有说具体的观点
从这一点可知：作文开头段不需要复杂，简单即可
Technology has had an impact on relationships inbusiness, education and sociallife. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interactwithout ever meeting each other. Secondly,services like Skype create new possibilities
for relationships between students and teachers. Forexample, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or
country. Finally, many people use social networks, likeFacebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rathert han face to face.
学习点1：有些同学经常问我多观点的段落怎么处理，Simon这段话是个例子。大家可以看到，哪怕是多观点，也不是一语带过，内容的充实是很重要的，看最后一句话，使用faceBOOK作为例子，并用定语从句形容PEOPLE，增加了段落的内容
学习点2：create new possibilities 替代我们常用的provideopportunities for 学习点3：rather than后面可以加副词短语，留意和instead of的对比 学习点4：学习黄色标注的词伙
On the one hand, these developments can be extremelypositive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication waslimited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions byemail, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many ofus benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result ofisolating people and discouraging realinteraction. For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationshipsare a poor substitute forreal friendships.
学习点1：注意一些很多学生常会犯错的地方，譬如说 limited to 这里的to是个介词，需要加名词，然后benefit 是不及物动词，没有被动语态 学习点2：mix with = socialize with
学习点3：文章没有什么很难的句子，主要依靠and连接
学习点4：一些词伙in social contexts, real interaction, in the real world等等
弱点：这个段落是正反观点写一段，不是一个好的选择，尽量避免在考试中这样写 【6.11】
plays a critical role in 中文：充当重要的角色
Factors such as temperature play a critical role in farming. in old age
中文：在年迈的时候
My mother has a very lively mind even in her old age. age-related diseases
中文：老年病
Money has been poured in the research on age-related diseases. 【6.9】
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other haschanged because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships thatpeople make? Has this been a positive or negative development? It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in variousways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects. 学习点1：开头段的背景句总是大家发怵的地方，SIMOn的背景句只是简单地改写题目的背景句。 Technology 改变了位置
Have had an influence替换了题目的has changed Communication替换了题目的interact with
学习点2 遇到这种混合类的话题，SIMON只是简单地说了下文章会说什么，并没有说明立场，也没有说具体的观点
从这一点可知：作文开头段不需要复杂，简单即可
Technology has had an impact on relationships inbusiness, education and social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly,services like Skype create new possibilities
for relationships between students and teachers. Forexample, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or
country. Finally, many people use social networks, likeFacebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face.
学习点1：有些同学经常问我多观点的段落怎么处理，Simon这段话是个例子。大家可以看到，哪怕是多观点，也不是一语带过，内容的充实是很重要的，看最后一句话，使用faceBOOK作为例子，并用定语从句形容PEOPLE，增加了段落的内容
学习点2：create new possibilities 替代我们常用的provide opportunitiesfor 学习点3：rather than后面可以加副词短语，留意和instead of的对比 学习点4：学习黄色标注的词伙 [6.8]
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other haschanged because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships thatpeople make? Has this been a positive or negative development? It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in variousways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects. 学习点1：开头段的背景句总是大家发怵的地方，SIMOn的背景句只是简单地改写题目的背景句。 Technology 改变了位置
Have had an influence替换了题目的has changed Communication替换了题目的interact with
学习点2 遇到这种混合类的话题，SIMON只是简单地说了下文章会说什么，并没有说明立场，也没有说具体的观点
从这一点可知：作文开头段不需要复杂，简单即可 [6.7]
第一段
On the one hand, I agree that
On the one hand, I would argue that … There are good reasons why… I would disagree with the view that ….
转折段
Nevertheless, I believe that…
Despite the above arguments, I believe that …. However, I would agree with those who believe that … On the other hand, it is understandable why …. [6.5] create laws 中文意义：
例句：it is important to create laws to protect the environment; otherwise theenvironmental problems may get worse. disposable incomes 中文意义：可支配收入
例句：Some people have disposable incomes, after they pay income tax. heart attacks 中文意义：心脏病
例句：Obese people are more likely to suffer a heart attack than the general population.
[6.4]
4 greenhouse gases
中文意义：温室气体
例句（朗文）：Carbon dioxide isa so-called greenhouse gas, which absorbs
energy from the sun. 5 phasing out
中文意思：逐渐停止
例句（朗文）：The subsidy for company cars is to be phased out next year.
6 solar power
中文意思：太阳能
例句（朗文）：They use solar power for all their heating.
[6.1] 替换的表达
在“老年人”上，大家可以说elderly people, seniorc itizens, senior people, 对于家庭来说，elderly relatives, 对于国家来说，可以说pensioners
在“天赋”上，大家可以说 Innate talent, Natural talent , Talents inherited via
genes , Natural abilities
“政府”资助的替换表达：government support,government funds, government funding, spend state budgets on, public expenditure on
“快餐”的替换表达：fast food, junk food, high-fat food products, fatty food, preprocessed food, convenience food
“当代”的替换表达：for the modern age, in modern times, in contemporary society, in the modern world
“和父母住在一起”的替换表达：live at home, stay at home, reside with parents, live at parents’ home, live under the same roof as parents
“科技发展”的替换表达：technological advances, technological development, technological progress
“交通工具”的替换表达：means of transport, mode of transport, form of transport…
很多同学翻译成“transport tool”这种中式英文
“肢体语言”的替换表达：body language, 广义来说，non-verbal behaviour,non-verbal cues
“手机”的替换表达：mobile phones, smartphones.广义来说，可以说“new communication technology”或者“mobiletechnology”
“智力发育”的替换表达：intellectual development, braindevelopment, cognitive
development