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Section Ⅶ Reading for Writing——建议信

本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。 Ⅰ.Pre-writing

(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model 10 September，2018 Dear Worried Friend，

You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.

I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together? I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend. All the best， Susan Luo

(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases

①recommend vt. 建议 ②unhealthy adj. 不健康的 ③encourage vt. 鼓励 ④useful adj. 有用的

⑤advice vt. 忠告，建议 ⑥in one’s spare time 闲暇

⑦look forward to 盼望，期望 ⑧be worried about 对…… 担心 ⑨be attracted to 喜爱 ⑩be addicted to 对……上瘾

?concentrate on 集中精力于 ?be good for/do good to 对……有益处 ?make friends 交朋友 ?hear from 收到……的来信 ?enjoy oneself/have fun玩得愉快 Ⅱ.While-writing

假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。

1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；

2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友； 3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。 Step 1 List the outline of the passage. Paragraph 1：the purpose of the letter Paragraph 2：the suggestions that you give Paragraph 3：the writer’s hope Step 2 List the words，phrases and sentences. 1.Words and phrases

①tip/advice/suggestion n. 建议 ②situation n. 情况 ③make friends 交朋友

④have trouble/difficulty in doing ... 做……有困难 ⑤take one’s advice 接受某人的建议

⑥share happiness and sorrow with... 和……同甘共苦 ⑦call for 需要

⑧put one’s heart into 全心全意 2.Sentences

①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(have trouble in...)

I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. ②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to do) The situation is easy to change if you take my advice. ③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why not)

Why not be a friend first，if you want to make friends? ④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’t it be a good idea...？) Wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? ⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as a saying goes) Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words and phrases.

however，to begin with，in addition，last but not least

15 Sept，2019 Dear Su Ru，

I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you. To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？In addition，wouldn’t it be a good idea if you share happiness and sorrow with your friend? Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed.Last but not least，wouldn’t it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends? It is well known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort. I hope you will find these ideas useful. All the best. Yours， Li Hua

Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage

Exchange your letter with your partner，and pay attention to the following points. □1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in good order? □2.Does the writer give reasons for the advice?

□3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions? □4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly? □5.Is the handwriting easy to read?