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Su Hua:Yes,I have. Some are already recommending the traditional Chinese dress for the welcome ceremony. Li Jiang:But it seems people have different opinions. Su Hua:What do you think?
Li Jiang:I think it's a good idea. It's an opportunity to make the Chinese culture better known to international students.
Su Hua:I agree. But we don't have to dress that way. That's not our daily style. Besides,it's not very convenient. Li Jiang:You see. It's the Chinese culture that the British friends are coming for. Just the right occasion. Su Hua:I prefer the school uniform. It's nice. It's also a better display of our school culture. 【写作内容】
1.用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2.在上述场合,你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装?请说明理由(不少于两点)。 【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3.不必写标题。 【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Possible version one:
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month. Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress while Su prefers the school uniform.
I would be happy to wear traditional Chinese clothes at the welcome ceremony. Firstly, this is precisely what the British visitors are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes. Their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive. The school uniforms are fine, but not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour. Secondly, the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese
culture. It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness, delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
The traditional Chinese clothes, it seems to me, will make the occasion very Chinese and inviting to the British guests.
Possible version two:
Li Jiang and Su Hua don't agree on what to wear when greeting the British students Li suggests traditional Chinese clothes while Su thinks the school uniforms are more suitable.
I prefer the school uniform to the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony next month. Although the traditional Chinese dress may look more beautiful and stylish, it is a little bit strange to walk around in it. We feel at ease in our school uniforms every day. What's more, the traditional Chinese dress can't reflect the unique culture of our school. From the design and colour of our uniforms, the British friends will learn more about our school. Besides, the choice of the traditional Chinese dress means extra money, and extra time, for we have to change it back after the event.
.So the school uniforms are a better choice than the traditional Chinese dress for such an occasion. 【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达要求考生根据所提供的对话信息提示写一篇文章,总结上述是否穿中国传统服饰接待外国来客的现象,阐述你是否倾向于穿中国传统服饰,并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。文章为任务型读写,属于议论文,写作时应以第一人称为主,第二人称为辅;一般现在时为主,一般将来时为辅。考生首先应当仔细阅读所提供的对话文字,明确其主旨;接着最后在此基础上合理安排好文章结构。本文可以从支持穿中国服饰和反对中国传统服饰观点中任选一进行阐述,书写是可用三段写作:第一段用约30词概括是否穿中国传统服饰接待外国来客的现象,提出文章主题;第二、三段指出你赞成穿中国传统服饰或反对穿中国传统服饰来接待外国来客,然后用2-3个理由或论据来支撑你的看法。
在遣词造句上,应当注意合理使用连接成分,以提高文章的逻辑性,如在列举理由时可以用Firstly,secondly,besides,what’s more等;还应尽量使用较复杂的句型如,使用名词性从句,状语从句,形式主语it等等。
2019年高考名校经典模拟试题
1.【东北三省四市2019届高三二模联考】校学生会计划举办“汉语桥”活动,你受学生会委托写一则通知,邀请你校美国留学生参加此活动。内容包括:
1. 介绍活动的意义;
2. 邀请美国留学生参加动员会 the pep rally; 3. 动员会的时间、地点。 注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头和结语已为你写好。 Notice
Dear overseas students from America
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The Students’ Union
【答案】Notice
Dear American overseas students,
Here comes the news that Chinese Bridge series activities will be held in our school. So all of participants are warmly welcome in the pep rally to get fully prepared for the follow-ups.
Themed at promoting Chinese culture around the world, Chinese Bridge acts as a platform to help narrow the gap of mutual understanding about China. Whoever is actively involved in it will develop a positive awareness of Chinese and its culture behind. Based on it, the pep rally is scheduled in our school auditorium from 14:00pm-15:00pm next Friday afternoon.
Please make sure you are available at that time and join us.
Student’s Union
【解析】 【分析】
这是一篇应用文,要求写一则通知。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,1. 介绍活动的意义;2. 邀请美国留学生参加动员会;3.动员会的时间、地点。第二,人称为第三人称。第三,
时态以一般现在时为主,兼用一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,校学生会计划举办“汉语桥”活动,热烈欢迎所有的参与者参加动员会。第二段,介绍活动的意义;邀请美国留学生参加动员会;动员会的时间、地点。第三段,表达希望。
available,Chinese Bridge series activities,in our school,pep rally,第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: participants ,get fully prepared for,promoting Chinese culture around the world,act as, narrow the gap of mutual understanding,be involved in sth, develop a positive awareness of ,in our school auditorium, from 14:00pm-15:00pm, next Friday afternoon。
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:过去分词作原因状语Themed at promoting Chinese culture around the world, Chinese Bridge acts as a platform to help narrow the gap of mutual understanding about China. whoever 引导的主语从句Whoever is actively involved in it will develop a positive awareness of Chinese and its culture behind。 第五步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰,语言规范,段落整齐,语篇连贯,层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:过去分词作原因状语Themed at promoting Chinese culture around the world, Chinese Bridge acts as a platform to help narrow the gap of mutual understanding about China. whoever 引导的主语从句Whoever is actively involved in it will develop a positive awareness of Chinese and its culture behind。
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次,整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。 2.【河北省保定市2019届高三下学期第二次模拟】书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是李华,受学校委托,邀请本校国际班的学生一起参加纪念中国改革开放40周年展览活动,请根据题示写一封电子邮件发到校园网告知他们活动内容,要点如下: 1. 时间及地点(本周末,学校图书馆); 2. 展览内容(照片、实物、高科技成果等); 3. 学生交流。
注意:100词左右;可适当增加细节以使行文连贯流畅。
参考词汇:the 40th anniversary of reform and opening-up改革开放四十周年
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________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear classmates,
On behalf of our school, I am writing to invite all of you in the international class to an exhibition to celebrate the 40th anniversary of China’s reform and opening-up.
The exhibition will be held in our school library this weekend. At the exhibition you will enjoy various pictures and real objects of different periods, which will give you a real insight into the great changes in China. Besides, high-tech products will be on display to show the great achievements we have made. A wide range of activities are included. In particular, you are welcome to exchange your ideas about the exhibition in the meeting room at 4 pm.
I believe you will be impressed and have a better understanding of our country Looking forward to your reply.
【解析】 【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假设你是李华,受学校委托,邀请本校国际班的学生一起参加纪念中国改革开放40周年展览活动,请根据题示写一封电子邮件发到校园网告知他们活动内容,要点如下:1. 时间及地点(本周末,学校图书馆);2. 展览内容(照片、实物、高科技成果等);3. 学生交流。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:On behalf of our school(代表我们学校);celebrate the 40th anniversary of China’s reform and opening-up.(庆祝中国改革开放四十年);A wide range of activities(广泛的活动);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级词汇和句子。The exhibition will be held in our school library this weekend.句中使用一般现在时态的被动语态;At the exhibition you will enjoy various pictures and real objects of
.Yours, Li Hua