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different periods, which will give you a real insight into the great changes in China.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；I believe you will be impressed and have a better understanding of our country.句中使用宾语从句；另外，On behalf of，Besides, In particular,等的运用为文章增色添彩。 3.【2019年淮北?宿州高三第二次模拟】书面表达(满分25分)

假定你是红星中学的李华，你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动，他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件，主要内容包括: 1. 介绍你校体育课程及活动; 2. 推荐一项中国传统体育项目。 注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school on a one-year exchange program. Since you enjoy sports, I would like to introduce the sports courses in our school as well as a Chinese traditional sport.

First of all, for each class in our school, there are two to three periods of PE class every week. Basic courses, including playing basketball and running, are offered to students. Besides, the school sports meeting is held annually, which students can take part in according to their interests. What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu, a traditional sport in China. Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.

Looking forward to your arrival!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给英国朋友Peter写一封邮件。

【详解】书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是红星中学的李华，你的英国朋友Peter热爱体育运动，他将作为交换生到你校学习一年。请你给他写封邮件，主要内容包括：1. 介绍你校体育课程及活动；2. 推荐一项中国传统体育项目。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式。如Besides, the school sports meeting is held annually, which students can take part in according to their interests.使用了定语从句；Chinese calligraphy is the treasure of traditional Chinese culture, which has a history of 5,000 years.使用了定语从句；What I recommend to you to learn is Chinese kungfu, a traditional sport in China.使用了名词性从句；Practicing it regularly will help you stay fit in a fantastic way.使用了动名词作主语。另外文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

4.【河南省安阳市2019届高三毕业班第二次模拟】假定你是李华，你校手工俱乐部（Handicraft Club）将邀请民间艺人（folk artist）来校教大家制作灯笼。请给你班的交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他一同参加。内容包括： 1．邀请原因； 2．活动内容； 3．活动时间和地点。 注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m Li Hua and I have a piece of good news to tell you. Next Saturday our school’s Handicraft Club will hold an activity, where we will learn how to make lanterns by hand. I know you are crazy about Chinese traditional handicraft works, so I’m writing to invite you to attend it with me.

On that day, a famous folk artist will be invited to teach us skills of making different kinds of lanterns using

various materials, including red paper and silk. At the same time, he will tell us the history and origin of lanterns. The activity will be held in Room 405 in the library. Looking forward to your presence.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封邮件；假定你是李华，你校手工俱乐部（Handicraft Club）将邀请民间艺人（folk artist）来校教大家制作灯笼。请给你班的交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他一同参加。内容包括：1．邀请原因；2．活动内容；3．活动时间和地点。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：have a piece of good news（有一则好消息），Handicraft Club（手工俱乐部），make lanterns（做灯笼），handicraft works（手工艺作品）；folk artist（民间艺人）等。 第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Next Saturday our school’s Handicraft Club will hold an activity, where we will learn how to make lanterns by hand. 运用了定语从句；On that day, a famous folk artist will be invited to teach us skills of making different kinds of lanterns using various materials, including red paper and silk.运用了被动语态。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 5.【安徽省黄山市2019届高三第三次质量检测】假如你是李华，你的美国网友 Peter参加了“中国首届外国留学生软笔书法竞赛”并获得了一等奖，请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1. 祝贺获奖； 2. 肯定成绩和努力；

3. 约时间在网上交流学习中国软笔书法的心得。 注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 信件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：

中国首届外国留学生软笔书法竞赛 the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations

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Yours Li Hua

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your taking first place in the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students. As your friend, I just want you to know I am more than glad at your success.

“Everything comes to him who waits. For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese calligraphy and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you referred to many calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some calligraphy masters. Hard work pays off. Eventually, it was through your hard work and talent that you succeeded in winning the championship!

I’m happy about what you have achieved and I hope to exchange with you our experience in learning calligraphy so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.

Congratulations again.

Yours Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假如你是李华，你的美国网友 Peter参加了“中国

,

首届外国留学生软笔书法竞赛”并获得了一等奖，请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1. 祝贺获奖；2. 肯定成绩和努力；3. 约时间在网上交流学习中国软笔书法的心得。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：offer my sincere congratulations to you（向你们提供我真诚的祝贺）； the First Chinese Calligraphy Contest for Foreign Students（中国首届外国留学生软笔书法竞赛）；consulted some calligraphy masters（咨询一些书法家）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。As your friend, I just want you to know I am more than glad at your success.句中使用宾语从句；Not only have you referred to many calligraphy books, but also you have consulted some calligraphy masters.部分倒装用在句中；Eventually, it was through your hard work and talent that you succeeded in winning the championship!句中使用强调句型。

6.【广东省六校2019届高三第四次联考】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Justin 得知你想提高英文写作能力，给你寄来一本《英文 写作要素》（The Elements Of Style）。请你回一封信。内容包括： 1. 感谢对方； 2. 会认真研读； 3. 你的回礼。 注意：

1. 词数 100 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Justin,

How is everything going with you?

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