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Tommy was a naughty boy. One day he saw a girl playing happily under a tree. He decided to play a trick on her. So he picked up a stone and hid himself behind the tree. Then he threw the stone at the girl. Hit on the back, the girl began to cry. Tommy was very happy and went away with a smile.
A moment later, he saw a dog sleeping on a bench. He picked up a stone again
and hit the dog. The dog woke up and jumped at him. Tommy was so frightened that
he ran away as fast as he could.
E. 过程描写
Useful expressions: While…..? ? as soon? ? as
be about to do….when….? ? just? ? as….
suddenly / all of a suddenly? ?
? ? happen to do…/ It happened that…
Tips:
How to write a process paragraph?
1. 审题: 文字，图表 2.文体 3. 人称 4. 时态 5. 内容要点 a) 时间 b) 地点 c) 人物
d) 事件经过
6. 所需词汇及句型：
Practical writing: NMET 2000
假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。 警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。
注意：1 目击者应该准确报告事实； 2 词数100左右；
3 结尾已为你写好。
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After two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Possible version:
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. Suddenly the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
学生习作 （A）
At 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8th ,2000, I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road, taking my morning walk as usual. I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park. He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing. The car was so fast that the old man even didn’t have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard. I thought the driver would stop to help but she didn’t. Instead, she just drove off, leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain. Fortunately, I noted down the details: it was a yellow car, the plate number of which was AC864, and the driver was a young lady. After that I went over to check out the old man.
（B）
It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb,8,2000. I was walking along the southern side of Park Road. I noticed that an old man coming out of City Park was going to cross the road. There was no car at the moment, so the old man started to cross the road. What happened next really surprised me. A yellow car roared down the 3rd Street, made a right turn and knocked the old man down. It happened in such a short time that the old man had no time to react. Seeing this, I rushed to the place where the old man was hit just in tim
e to see the plate number of the yellow car. It was AC864.
F. 地点描写 参考篇目：Unit 5 The British Isles
Useful expressions: be located in / lie in / be situated in
in the west of, to the west of off the east coast of
cover an area of …… square kilometers
be made up of / consist of be separated from be surrounded by has a population of
******** ********* ******
Location: north-west of Beijing Area: 3.5 square kilometers History: built in Qing Dynasty, 150 years of construction in 1860, Anglo-French Forces invaded Beijing, set fire, took away treasures, ruins,
new China, protected, part of it, rebuilt in 1980’s,
Yuanmingyuan Park
Yuanmingyuan , which is a ruined park, is located in the north-west of Beijing. It covers an area of 3.5 square kilometers. It was built during the Qing Dynasty. After 150 years of construction, it became one of the most famous palaces in China as well as in the world.
However, when Anglo-French forces invaded Beijing in 1860, the whole palace was set on fire. Treasures were taken away and stones lay in ruins.
It was not until the founding of New China that it began to be protected. Part of it was rebuilt in 1980’s.
The stones take on a golden color at the sunset, as if they were telling the story of yesterday.
文章的检查
时态，词形，人称，数，逻辑关系
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8,2000. 1._________ I was walking along Park Road towards to the east 2. ________
when a old man came out of the park on the other 3. ________
side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up 4. ________
Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. 5. ________
The next moment the car hit a man while he 6. ________
was acrossing the road. He fell with a cry. The 7. ________
car not stop but drove off at great speed heading 8. ________
west. I notice the driver was a young woman, 9. ________
the plate number was AC 864. About two minutes 10. _______
later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
1. in→on 2. to去掉 3. a 改为an 4. 正确 5. made改为make
6. a 改为an 7. acrossing应为crossing 8. not前加did
9. notice→noticed 10. the plate number前加and
书面表达常见类别及训练描述性写作
一. 教学内容： 描述性写作
二. 重点、难点： I. 特点及常用结构
1. 描述性文章是把人物、事件、景观、地点、环境等用生动的语言，形象地描绘出来。 2. 描述性文章的结构 （1）人物：
开头应有简明的介绍
文章的主体部分可按时间或事件的主次进行描述 结尾进行评论或谈感受 （2）地点：
要学会准确地表示方位的词或短语
描述地点的位置通常由上至下，从里到外，从左至右，从远到近。 总之，无论是描述人物，还是地点、环境，都要详略得当，重点突出。 3. 学习并牢记下面的短语和句型 表空间顺序
in front of, in the front of, at the back of, on the right （left）side
close to , next to, opposite, across, inside, outside
in （to）the south / east / west / north on one side …, on the other side（of） 常用短语和句型： 方位
1. There is a tall shelf on the left of my room. （on the right of, in the front of, near the window, ）
2. Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. （On the right of the room,）
3. Next to it is a bed. （In front of it, At the back of, In the middle of, To the right of ）
4. They are opposite the door. （on the left / right of the room.） 5. The office building is in the east of the campus. （in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of, ）
6. The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.
描述国家，城市等
7. China is located in Asia. （be situated…be surrounded by, lie to the east of ）
8. It covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers. 9. The population of this city is 100,000. 路线
10. When you come out of …（get to …reach…）
11. Cross the street（river）（keep walking along… walk down…） 12. Turn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road. （the second traffic lights, the first crossing, ）
13. Take the first turning on your left. （take the path which crosses the river.））
14. Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right. 15. You’ll see （find）it 人物
16. My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with kids. 17. He is about 5 feet and 7inches tall.
18. She has a round face with two big eyes. 描述物品
19. This rope is 100 meters long. = The length of this rope is 100 meters. = This rope is 100 meters in length. （in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape）
20. It is a round yellow hat with pink flowers on it. It’s made of straw.
21. There are three books in the drawer.
II. 范文讲解