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Best wishes.

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】Dear Justin,

How is everything going with you? I’m so excited to have received the book The Elements Of Style you sent to me, which is the very book that I had been looking forward to. Thanks sincerely for your considerate thought.

As you know, I am working at improving my English writing ability recently, and the book will be very useful, and will be a great help. Actually, I have made a plan to study and read the book intensively and carefully. In this way, I’m fully convinced that I can achieve my goal.

In return for your favor, I mail a book named The History Of China to you, since you are eager to know something about Chinese culture. Hopefully, you will like it.

Best wishes. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信；假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Justin 得知你想提高英文写作能力，给你寄来一本《英文 写作要素》（The Elements Of Style）。请你回一封信。内容包括：1. 感谢对方；2. 会认真研读；3. 你的回礼。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：look forward to（期待），considerate（体贴的），be a great help（非常有帮助），In return for（作为……的报答）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I’m so excited to have received the book The Elements Of Style you sent to me, which is the very book that I had been looking forward to.运用了定语从句；I mail a book named The History Of China to you, since you are eager to know something about Chinese culture.运用了原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾

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驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 7.【宁夏银川一中2019届高三第二次模拟】书面表达(满分25分)

请根据你对下面这幅图的理解，写一篇100字左右的英语短文。 请包括以下内容: 1.简要描述图画内容

2.联系实际说说自己的看法和建议 提示:smog 雾霾

As is vividly shown in the picture, a tiny man

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【答案】As is vividly shown in the picture, a tiny man living in the city is standing there wearing a mask, terrified by the heavy smog, which looks like a huge frightening monster.

What the picture mirrors is clearly heavy smog and severe air pollution. Confronted with potential risks of sickness, people are always forced to wear masks in order to avoid breathing poisonous air.With smog getting increasingly serious, environmental protection has become an urgent issue for human beings. As a saying goes, great things may be done by mass effort.

For one thing, our government should develop more green and energy saving ways to lower the emission of polluted air. For another, every single, person should raise their awareness of environmental protection and use more public transport. Only if we spare no effort to protect our environment, can we enjoy a greener and better life. 【解析】 【分析】

这是一篇看图作文，对于雾霾的看法。

【详解】看图作文就是依据图画所表现的情景，按照规定和要求进行写作。一般的看图作文就是就图说话：要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。这里因为图画上有一个提示词smog，所以学生很容易想出这是这幅画的主题是关于雾霾的。第一段先叙述是画面上是什么；第二段写画面的内容。第三段写出自己的观点和建议。综合分析这里叙述的是现在的存在情况，所以句子应该用一般现在时。

【点睛】一、正确理解提示和要求。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。 二、确定体裁格式。根据图片内容确定好题材与体裁，弄清是写人还是写景，是说明还是叙事，是书信还是日记或其他应用文体。 三、确立人称。清晰把握作文的人称线条，切不可上下矛盾，混淆不清。 四、确定时态和语态。弄清所要叙述的内容事实是已然、未然还是正在进行，从而确立主体时态。 五、看懂图意；切中题意。正确理解图画的基本事实，并根据每幅画之间的联系，弄清要表达的主题和梗概。 六、展开想象。仔细观察细节（图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等），依据图画细节对画面的内容加以想象、扩充或补充。

8.【河北省唐山市2019届高三第二次模拟】假定你是李华，你笔友Peter所在的林肯中学将举办中国文化周活动，他来信向你寻求活动相关建议。请你给他回信，内容要点包括： 1. 活动内容及形式； 2. 说明推荐理由； 注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 可能用到的词汇：剪纸 paper-cutting 书法 calligraphy

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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Peter:

I’m very glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Week activity will be held in your school. It’s a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture.

的 First a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice. As a traditional Chinese art, paper-cutting includes different themes like plants, animals, stories and so on. Additionally, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also

arouse people’s interest, which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture. What’s more, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food, are surely welcome. And a Chinese painting show is always attractive. I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给笔友Peter写一封回信。

【详解】这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要为假定你是李华，你的笔友Peter所在的林肯中学将举办中国文化周活动，他来信向你寻求活动相关建议。请你给他回信，内容要点包括：1. 活动内容及形式；2. 说明推荐理由。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多。需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合整个文章,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，文章词数适当。作者在文中使用了较多的高级表达方式。如Additionally, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people’s interest, which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture.使用了动名词作主语和非限定性定语从句。另外文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

9. 【山西省运城市2019届高三高考适应性测试（4月）】假定你是李华，你从某网站上得知山西省博物馆正在招募暑假英语讲解员,请你根据以 下提示,给博物馆负责外国游客接待的Mr. Jason写一封英文自荐信.内容包括:

1. 表达意愿；2. 自荐理由；3. 恳请获准。

注意:1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:讲解员interpreter Dear Mr. Jason,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Jason,

I’m Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to apply for the position you advertised on the Website. First of all, having studied English for about ten years, I have good command of English. With fluent oral English, I’m convinced that I have no difficulty in communicating with foreign guests.

Furthermore, since I grow up here, I’m familiar with the history and traditions of Shanxi Province. And I have a strong affection for them. More importantly, considered as a kind, confident and outgoing boy/ girl, I can make friends with different people in no time. I am sure foreign visitors will be satisfied with my thoughtful and excellent service.

I would deeply appreciate it if you could give me the precious chance to serve as an interpreter. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】 【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封推荐信：假定你是李华，你从某网站上得知山西省博物馆正在招募暑假英语讲解员,请你根据以 下提示,给博物馆负责外国游客接待的Mr. Jason写一封英文自荐信.内容包括:1. 表达意愿；2. 自荐理由；3. 恳请获准。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：apply for the position you advertised on the Website（申请你have a good command of Englishfamiliar with the history and traditions 在网站上登广告的职位）；（对英语熟练）；of Shanxi Province（熟悉山西的历史和传统）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级词汇和句子。I am writing to apply for the position you advertised on the Website.句中使用省略引导词的定语从句；having studied English for about ten years, I have good command